I am righting a story about sleep paralysis. my book is called sleep paralysis. It’s about a girl who has sleep paralysis and she is trying to see if her if symptoms are real and their happening. My success is making this story because it helps people know that it’s not real its just your body waking up.what I messed up on was trying many ways to make the story and most of the story’s are good but one was bad I did not like what I put in the story. I almost put this part I did not want I said she woke up she saw a shadow at the door and she peed her self I did not like that part cause it was cheesy to put in a scary story.